Jakitza is treated like an adult.
Before I have to dodge fruit... the explanation for Niriko's behavior is coming as originally scheduled! I tried to switch the order of the scenes but it just didn't flow right (part of the artblock I mentioned at the shoutboard); having the explanation closing the scenes previous the match worked better, and the scene that's just starting leads much more naturally into how things will be explained.
Besides, this needed exposure too; there are many pieces of the puzzle, and our heroes must now try to piece them together. Plus, Quitzam is there, that means exposition! Nothing explains things like a grumpy sea-beaten wizard who lights his pipe with his fingers.
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