Thursday, July 15, 2010

Bonus update! - Unforgiving

Behari is justifiably unwelcoming to her visitor, and apparently he had more than one reason to pay a visit.




Made it! A bonus update at last! I've been keeping the tally, tho', and the donation jar is close for a second bonus update... ack.

This is one of the scenes that I have in my mind clearly and look for ways around a specific action, in this case being Behari in the last panel. One of the fun (and hard) things of writing a webcomic is planning ahead while the current story moves unrelentingly forward, and writing around specific events so that the buildup and release (not necessarily and aftermath) happen in the same update.

In this case, again, was writing what Behari and the Yet Unnamed Guy's dialogue in a way to reflect her deep resentment and the hints at his motives AND lead up to the last panel I had already envisioned... and into the plotwise info dump of next update ;).

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